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Jun. 22nd, 2005 09:06 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
changeyourstars8Hallelujah, that did not suck. LOL
He basically liked it-- had a few suggestions as to which character's p.o.v. I used during certain scenes, and thought that maybe I had too *much* dialogue (I'm still working on that), but overall, good.
Yay!
I will get to work on a second draft . . . *after* the honeymooon.
He basically liked it-- had a few suggestions as to which character's p.o.v. I used during certain scenes, and thought that maybe I had too *much* dialogue (I'm still working on that), but overall, good.
Yay!
I will get to work on a second draft . . . *after* the honeymooon.
